Beautiful poetic prose Veronicka! The scene itself and the relationships expressed within it, both with yourself, and with the 'you', are so vibrant. Parts of ourselves we would rather forget, but are reminded of and which return again and again. Often through the innocent remarks and requests of others. I get a sneaking feeling that the crazy you are burying is poetry itself? Shout it loud! :)
No, the crazy I refer to is actual insanity lol the poetry is clarity and reason, the opposite. Thank you for your wonderful feedback. I'm always amazed when you guys take the time to leave me a kind comment. ❤