MISERABLE LOVE

in #poetry6 years ago

When you face the door but you can't get out
and wish to be on the other side,
away from the screams, scoffs and shouts,

when you see the light seeping in
through the hinges of the door,
and feel the taunting smell of freedom,

when your heart flickers as a candle
left prey to the moody winds and
you hope it would make it through the day,

that's when you know you're trapped in
what they call miserable love,
a little space between the abyss and above.

The place where you feel each grain of sand
in that hourglass bringing you down swiftly;
buried alive, your body aching stuck in this rut.

There's only one push and all the charade falls,
though it won't happen unless you set the tone,
give that small nudge, leave ego and guilt aside!

In a short while, you'll switch roles and
it won't be easy to climb up the horse,
ride out the storm without getting wet!

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Here are some of my poems:
LONG WAY DOWN 2
LONG WAY DOWN 1
YOU ARE NOT ALONE
ALL BOUT LOVE
A TALE OF A MINNOW AND A WHALE
SPIDER QUEEN
MINA'S EULOGY
THE CIRCLE OF LIFE
YOU KNOW IT ALL
CONFESSION OF A HUSBAND
BROKEN DREAM
THE RETURN OF A HERX
CLOSE THE DOORS
IT IS LOVE
BROKEN SOUL
FREEDOM
SPEECHLESS
CHECKOUT POINT
TOO DEEP - TEASER
TEENAGE YEARS
A CHILD'S MIND
PINK
PAIN
DARE
LOST
LUCKY # 3- Teaser
THE LION- Teaser
REDEMPTION- Teaser
FADE THE PAIN- Teaser
THE SILVER TRAY- Teaser
A PAWN - Teaser

Lavi Picu is the author of three soulful poetry collections: Whiteless Thoughts, Burden of love and Tales of a moody heart. She is a Canadian writer, majored in Linguistics, with a background in translations and writing. She’s also a ghost writer, a blogger with a focus on arts and health, a Lyme disease advocate, a mother and a self-taught artist.

@2018 LaviPicu aka Lyme Poet. All rights reserved.

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I like that one. Good job. Do you happen to find the images after or first?

Usually I look for the images after I write the poems. But it does happen to have a poem inspired by an image. :-)

Very powerful poem! <3

Lovely poem, @enginewitty read it on #wordswithwitty tonight and it really came to life.

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I would have loved to hear him reading it. Is there a recording of the show? A big thanks for the support, @c0ff33a and @enginewitty!

Yes (far as I know), @shadowspub usually records the shows :)

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This is fabulous. I especially like this line:

give that small nudge, leave ego and guilt aside!

Glad @enginewitty read this on Words with Witty. :)

Thanks, honey! Usually guilt and ego are those keeping people in a relationship when love is gone.

You're post is rich.

Thank you for stopping by!

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