First of all, let me tell you your sonnet is musical and beautiful.
The occasional and brief alliterations make its reading delicious, and I like the sounds you picked for your final rhymes.
It is so funny I chose to write my last fifty-word tale in verse, too. But I did use only 50 words (which gave me a lot of trouble; it was like putting a small world into a even smaller bottle).
I've been working on a sonnet about my city. I'll let you know, so you can read it when you have the time.
Hugs and thank you for this beautiful piece! :)
P.s. Write it down next time ;)
Hi, my dear Marlyn,
I am so glad that you enjoyed my sonnet! :D Thank you for your very kind words about it.
Please do let me know when your city sonnet is complete, I look forward to reading it. And, yes, I will write it down next time.
Big hugs! ;)