You nailed this mate!

Comfort zone is a Mirage, it creates a smokescreen in our face making us think it's the best for us. But daring ourselves to go for greater heights is rather the best for us.

You have some interesting lines here.. These are my favourite

The one that encloses you on an island in the sea
and embroider you with a needlefish on an algae loom.

Cheers! Keep Steeming!