Coral Crowns of Living Light - A Month of Daily Haiku (Day 6)

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     5 years ago 

    Very emotional haiku, I would love to be in a coral like this

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     5 years ago 

    Cheers @tcpaikano

    I'm an avid scuba diver so this Haiku just sort of came natural to me. I love being on the reef and observing the life there :)

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       5 years ago 

      Hello Raj. It's been quite a while. I hope you are good. Your writing is as good as always and I am dropping a haiku piece soon (about to drop it and then saw this). You may check it out and tell me what you think as I am just learning about haiku. I had dropped some but don't know if I am on the right track.
      Cheers!

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         5 years ago (edited)

        Hi Seyi :)

        I'm glad you enjoyed the Haiku. Sorry I can't help at the moment with feedback on poetry as I'm away from steem for a while. I schedule these posts using steempeak so that I can continue posting while I'm busy with other things.

        Here is a handy website for checking that your Haiku have the right syllable count per line.

        http://www.haikusyllablecounter.com

        It should be:

        Line 1: 5 syllables
        Line 2: 7 syllables
        Line 3: 5 syllables

        I hope this helps, I wanted to make sure to respond in comment to an old friend :)

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           5 years ago (edited)

          I am actually looking out for the right emotions in the haiku. Thanks. I understand. Take care of yourself.
          Cheers!

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