Awesome poem. I comment with this
when spring came the young shoots of hope began to appear
from the trunk of an idea that is far from understanding is getting closer
sprout developing positive thoughts
until will be able to find what ever taught

if love flashed in your memory
take him back to tell the story
about the struggle through the fog of ignorance
walking in the dark night without a lantern

in order to see the stars in the sky
so as not to be embarrassed when lost in the sea
in order to be a direction guide
to keep walking by your side

with your soft hand embraced
traversing the destiny of life to the gates of success
from an open door of knowledge
until it will find it on the edge

warm regard from Indonesia
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