Passing rains

in #poetry6 years ago


Passing rains


Flashes gone and the crashes ceased,
the boiling from underneath calmed.
Strikes the heart and drums the soul,
now gone was the fire that was held.
Broken the spell of the voices in song,
cracked beneath whip and in chains.
Choirs of armies marching down street,
boots heavy open the dusted spirit.
Lost to the complacency of certainty,
drowned in a bucket of time wasted.
Tasting victory that was never in reach,
for the rope was never to be reached.
Listing it all like an ode to the giants,
legends that would never exist again.
Chance was taken and mistakes made,
defeat was the only place it would go.
None knew nor could it be ever known,
But each will arrive, strive and then slow.


Taraz
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Beautiful poem :) I saw that @enjoywithtroy likened it to the rise and fall of the Nazis and I can certainly see that, but I also think it's about every human soul. At least to me, it is. You're a very talented poet @tarazkp :D

A passing rain announcing a defeat, but time passed without seeing the sun.

Or the Son. What is good can be clouded in the aftermath from the storm.

You have a lot of reason is a matter of life. I just followed the line of interpretation of the poetry

Lovely poem and photo. In a way it reminds me of the rise and fall of Nazi Germany or other rises and falls in history. Thanks @tarazkp

Beautiful and original. I liked it, @tarazkp

Choirs of armies marching down street,
boots heavy open the dusted spirit.

Very interesting figure of speech.

I wish you success and inspiration on
new bright works.

Nice one man, Love the contrast and the colors!!

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