The shadows without

in #poetry6 years ago

The shadows without

 

In the darkness it waits, eyes glinting and unblinking
Breathing in the memories of all the things that have come to pass
Lurking deepness and sparing no beats
The terror and the criminal, the lover and the just
The light calls forward but it is pressed against the back
No time is there for the heartless, fear has no place to rest
A hand moves but whose, the reflection is not in sync
There is another here maybe more unknowns in this nest
Along the edge or in the clear it is impossible to tell
Riding the crest of a wave or rolling down a slickened slope
The slide begins the level becomes unbalanced
Feet are kept to go on a few more slow steps of hope
Pushing ahead when there is still the point of light behind
Driving into uncertain to take a chance on forever
The known holds safety but in there is nothing left to find
The attached pulling back, the line now must sever
Here it must be no matter who else is walking near
The journey takes many feet but the destination stand two
Lonely it is not but alone it will always become
Facing the cold, the heat the blindness of all but a few
Voices heard, whispers on the winged winds of the night
That name was mine I am certain but memory had no hold
Swing from side to side to side, swaying to and fro
Lost in the winters morn no sun would light with gold
Onward and deeper within, pushing with all that might
Tearing at the walls of truth that none can abide
The light behind is gone and only the darkness stays
A crack of light breaks through and arrives the other side.

Taraz
[ a Steemit original ]

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Wow you really did a nice work here. That's a great poem. Keep it on

Hey Taraz, have you ever considered to join the writers block? Your poetry is awesome, you are a great individual and the community over there is just a great fit in my opinion. You can find a lot of people with a lot of experience with poetry. Would love to welcome you there!

It all sounds too much like school though. I haven't really given it a look tbh.

Well it's all very non-commital anf they give very good and solid feedback to the pieces you submit. I thibk it's very valueable and the community consists of very talented and smart people in their fields. But of course that's all up to you. Just wanted to let you know :).

Will keep it in mind.

This is the definition of "inspiration"
You really helped in this your poem, I am also trying to pull some stunts with poems.

Nice one, I was really motivated!!

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