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RE: The Magnetism of Almost Touching [Day 70]
I love number 3 it is really beautiful but the forest line had me power snagging as it totally kicked me out of the rhythm . I love however the image it gives so My i make a small suggestion, instead of
A mirror of moss for a bauble,
a mineral path for a tome.
This forest exchanges my crate for a cradle,
I trade it a hut for a home.
how about this
A mirror of moss for a bauble,
a mineral path for a tome.
This forest swaps crate for a cradle,
I trade it a hut for a home.
Thank you for the suggestion @tygertyger I will consider making an edit on that line :-)
I was stuck on that line, actually, so it's perfect.