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RE: Stone horizons

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)
I find this poem dense, like the emotions it harbors. The allegory that recreates the wall in consonance with the charged clouds indicates continuous or permanent clash or interpenetration between elements that, naturally, come together in the heights with the consequent result of: intense cold, fog, fine and persistent rain and, in some cases, hail. Taking this panorama to the metaphorical plane, I perceive the threat of an internal storm for known, recognized and even family reasons, if you will, because they are peaks that have been dealt with since ancient times.

While I paint the scene of tremors,
gather strength for yore's decay.

The relationship between writing and images is excellent and they announce that a cloudy storm is in progress due to a condition as natural as old, with the awareness that doing a self-examination, this time there is no apparent reason for this crisis.

I found in consorting with stones,
The spirits they harbor are free.

Fortaleza, @d-pend. You are great and we love you.

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