Thanks, I enjoyed reading.

You took the time to check yourself, for there are no corrections needed...well, maybe one, but I am sort of splitting hairs.

Garai watched his apprehension turn to excitement with anticipation.

Are you saying he was watching the apprehension of Osaze or was it his own apprehension which was turning to excitement...

Well done and you are creating for me an image of the two boys and the differences which I suspect will make them as friends stronger.

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