Ulog # 7 My first manga,"A feeling beyond the stars" ...

in #slothicorn6 years ago

Hello friends, I want to share with you my first manga, I hope you like it.

A feeling beyond the stars ...
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This is our story:
In a distant city, there lived two high school boys called: Haru and Shiru, who fought all the time for everything, in the school they did competitions to see who was better of the two. On a cold night while Haru was sleeping, his dog started barking until he woke the boy ... What's wrong with little spots? Haru said to his dog who was insistently looking at the trees, then a soft voice was heard saying: ... help me! Help me !! ... Haru looked through the trees and saw a girl with her hair tangled in the branches .. Smiling Haru said: Hey! How did you get there? ... she answered, I do not know, help me! then he trying to help her. fell on top of him and told him ups! Sorry ... Haru at that moment felt something strange in his body ...

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Speaking for a while talking to her ... the girl said oh no! I have to go, he told him where are you going? wait for me! , mysteriously the girl disappeared leaving Haru surprised ... but the days passed and the girl always came back to Haru's house ... and without realizing it she started liking the girl ... they spent a lot of time together but when it was time to say goodbye, it vanished ...

This is how the school holiday season ended ... Haru walked down the street and suddenly found Shiru the boy with whom he always argued, they stared at each other and started to fight ... but they listened to help me! help me!! and Shiru said that was that? ... Haru immediately looked in the trees and said oh no, it's her !! ... Shiru told her who? I look between the trees and it was that mysterious girl ... Shiru exclaimed wow what a beautiful girl! , Haru shouted nooo she is mine !, go away ... Shiru laughed and said: yours? ha ha ha, the girl insisted help me down please, Haru told him I'm going, then Shiru I pull him away and said noo I'll help her I'm taller and stronger than you, and again they started arguing ... she scream no longer fight and help me; they both helped her and Shiru told her what a pretty creature you are? she answered him: Misuky, then he smiled and said what a nice name my name is Shiru ..

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He got to know her a little more over time and also felt something strange about her ...

Time passed and the three left everywhere but it was obvious that Haru and Shiru were still arguing, but not as you could before the smile of Misuky left them delighted ..

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The boys sighed when they saw her smile ..

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On a sunny afternoon, Mizuki appears in the middle of a gang that bothered her. Then Haru and Shiru helped her as always to save her from difficult situations

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And as usual they started to fight again. The boys ... Misuky wanted to separate them but he could not then something strange came out of his back. It was very bright wings, the boys looked at her and said: what's wrong? Misuky crying told them I can not hide anymore ... I am an angel and I came to earth so you do not fight anymore, Haru and Shiru astonished told him but misuky do not cry, she answered I have to go back where I belong. ... the crying boys asked him not to leave if he stayed they would not fight anymore ... but Misuky said ... is that I .....

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I am in love with one of you ... then they will punish me for not fulfilling the mission., I should not fall in love ... Haru and Shiru looked at her in amazement saying ... that noble and beautiful creature, first thought of her duty and then in your feelings ..

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to be continue....

Meaning of their names:

HARU: Sunlight ..

SHIRU: Faithful to love ..

Misuky: Beautiful moon ...

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Thanks for the post, karinanunez.

I hope you don't mind if I test out some sentiment analysis on your post. This is an experimental bot running on a small % of posts, and if reaction is positive I'll increase that ratio and add features.

Your post had an average negative sentiment of 0.087 and an average positive sentiment of 0.197

The most positive sentence in your post had a positivity score of 0.767:

"help me!!"

The most negative sentence in your post had a negativity score of 0.267:

"... she answered, I do not know, help me!"

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