You got some very solid points. Strong argument.

Just wanted to point out a few grammar errors which I noted:

A struggling website owner ** that** (it should be who)thinks that tokenised incentives will turn around it's fortunes is deluded. These website owners should focus on going to where their users are and getting a presence there. Audiences have spoken. They want their content on one platform. Offering a token is don't (should be not) going to change that any time soon.