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RE: Something New You Would Love to Know About: Snax.One Be Rewarded for Social Activity

in #snax • 5 years ago

Hello, @mittymartz!

Thank you for the contribution. This is a promising project, and you managed to compose an interesting blog post about it. Your post is also well-illustrated with relevant visual content.

I like all the information about the project itself, and I appreciate the fact that you took the time to explain the registration process step by step. I think that users looking to get started on Snax will find your post very helpful. Keep up the good work.

That said, I think that your post could have been better written. There were issues of style and proofreading, and I would be happy to provide a few examples in a follow-up comment, if you wish.

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     5 years ago 

    I would be happy to provide a few examples in a follow-up comment, if you wish.

    Please i wish

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       5 years ago (edited)

      Hello!

      I will cite a few examples for you:

      Decentralization is when power is been distributed...

      This sentence should read: "Decentralization is when power is being distributed..."

      Snax is an Open-source Decentralized platforms that reward users for using social media platforms with snax token.

      Let me rephrase that: "Snax is an Open-source decentralized platform that rewards users with snax tokens for using social media platforms."

      Snax allows you send tokens to other users without paying any transaction fee and also the weight of your content determines the amount of snax token you get.

      I would rephrase that as well: "Snax allows you to send tokens to other users without paying any transaction fees, and the weight of your content is what determines the amount of snax tokens you get."

      Looking at social media platforms today, almost all of them are Centralized and when me saying almost is because i am not on all but the ones I am on are all centralized and I have seen what it is like to be a Centralized platforms whereby there are alot of monopoly and cant benefit from the system because it is centralized and those who can benefit are the ones with the marketing ideas and still at that they are not fully in control but in the Decentralized platforms everyone is in control of his or her business and you can have a stake of your own and earn on your own (no monopoly).

      This wall of text is just one sentence, and this is something you should avoid doing. Long and convoluted sentences lead to errors, and make your text hard to read.

      I hope you will find this comment useful.

      Have a good day!

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       5 years ago (edited)

      Thanks ....the comment is very useful and helpful

      I would walk on my sentence construction

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         5 years ago 

        Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!

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