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RE: Don't you forget about me - She - Short Story Serie - Part I
Great story @gabriellecd.
As a man, I've noticed something bad will happen in the end the moment I read this :
and as if it were prophetic, he returned. He just came back to give her, his reasons for separation
That's not a manly doing. Totally not. If he loves her, that is totally ironic. How can you endure the longing to a woman you love? Is communicating just a single bit of his time a big burden?
What I can say is, he don't want to lose her because he knew he was loved so much. So he didn't let go of the girl and the moment she found someone better than her, then that was the time he said goodbye.
PS : Long Distance relationships are very common to us here. Haha
- @sndbox steward
Omg i loved this feedback so badly...
yeah is a really fucked up story, but is based in something real so i have to ask the guy how he can do that if he loves her... but i know the answer... always was "is complicated" haha so... really really fuck up.
But only this part is based in real things, the next ones are pure fiction, hope that you read it