Great story. You really know how to keep the reader on edge. I thought he was dead in the end. I actually thought he was dead when he got to the train because of his carelessness.
Great story. You really know how to keep the reader on edge. I thought he was dead in the end. I actually thought he was dead when he got to the train because of his carelessness.
Thank you @big.ock I greatly appreciate your continued support!
I glad I was able to reach out and grab your attention! I know you've already read a bit and as I already said, continue to support. But, I am grateful for you to share how it made you feel. And that it wasn't just the way you expected! Sometimes, unmet expectations are good! Thanks @big.ock
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Don't read this if you haven't read the story yet.
No. It deffinately wasn't what I expected. The first time he woke up, I was sure it was just a dream. After that I had the feeling that it was a dream inside of a dream. I thought he was going to die when he got back to the train because he was feeling the pain from his injuries and you don't feel pain in a dream. That's why I said that in the first comment. It kept me in mystery the entire time. Now I feel that it wasn't a dream at all. I'm wondering if these humans were just the keepers pets in a world that exists somewhere else.
I can't give to much away! BUT I call the place Rangforne.