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RE: Steemit School Poetry 100 Day Challenge #66-Pop Goes the Weasel

Men return to a dark place.
The grave,
like the womb,
is an enclosed space,
that falls at the end of what’s in between.
In between the start and the end.
Whatever the start and the end maybe.

Your metaphors are amazing really, your language for such an omnious poetry Is really amazing, I Love the fact that you didn't use too many cliches these kinda poems makes us want to, however, thank you so much for writing I really enjoyed you're my pick of the week.

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Thanks much for this feedback.

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