100 Days of Poetry / Day 59 - Distant friends / Daleke prike - Original poetry

in #steemitschoolpoetry6 years ago (edited)



With fervor in plain eyes
they're not smiling.
With unparalleled misty glance
they are stabbing my heart.
Through dry dust,
just under the sun, without wind,
they are fighting for their freedom.

Stuffed lips
would love to give sweet kisses,
but time is not a friend of theirs.
Sleepless arms
are sharing hugs,
you can wait in a row.
They want to give even from the empty bowl.

Their dream is every day
on our plate.
Without a chance in a thousand lives,
their voice turns to rust.
The least hungry
is drinking water,
as if they're modest 'cause of us.

Listen to them clearly,
they cannot laugh.
Our grief is knocking on our door,
this sight seems like the end.
Well, for all the smiling ones, here's two-three pictures.
Do not ever forget our distant friends.







Sa žarom u plačljivim očima
oni se ne smiju.
Nepreglednim maglovitim pogledom
srce mi bodu.
Kroz suhu prašinu,
tik pod suncem, bez vjetra,
bore se za svoju slobodu.

Ispucane usne,
ljubile bi slatko,
ali vrijeme prijatelj im nije.
Besanim rukama
zagrljaje dijele,
kao pero lako,
žele dati čak iz prazne zdjele.

Njihov san je svaki dan
na pjatu našem.
Bez prilike u tisuću života
neče čuti im se glas.
Oni gladni
vodu piju,
kao da su skromni radi nas.

Poslušaj ih jasno,
oni se ne smiju.
A i nama tuga pokuca na vrata
kada vidimo njihovu sliku.
Pa evo, za sve nasmijane, dvi' tri' slike.
Nemojte nikad zaboravit daleke nam prikice* i prike*.

* prikica/prika - prijateljica/prijatelj




1st pic
2nd pic
3rd pic


Shout out to @d-pend for making this beautiful 100 day Poetry challenge. Thanks for your support and for your time you give. Much Cosmic Love.

Anyway, thank you all for reading and for your support! I will appreciate any feedback. Feel free to speak your mind, I'm open to all suggestions and critics, and I will take time to think about them seriously.


My SteemFollower Referral Link



Click the link below to join our Discord society

FINAL-LOGO smallest.png


We would greatly appreciate your witness vote

To vote for @adsactly-witness click the image below, scroll to the bottom and type "adsactly-witness" in the box

adsactly.gif



The STEEM Engine




BuddyUp

Sort:  

Remember that the primary reason for world hunger today is the milk, egg and dairy industry (next to political red tape). Most grain and crops in the third world are sold to the first world to feed livestock. the resources it takes to produce one pound of beff could have you showering for a week and feed 30 People a huge bowl of rice and veggies. We cannot make politicians care but we can control what it on our plates ...

I believe that is one of the reasons. The primary reason lies in the lack of love. :)

We are doing so many sh*tty things today and we're never going to stop in a system like this....

But you can choose not to contribute to it. You cannot control others but you can cntrol waht is on your plate, right?

I agree with you, but my point of view is that love is the basics of everything. Remove love and you got idiots and idiotic things happening. Put back love and people will start to be people...

But I am just a dreamer... :)

You are not wrong but you can't force others to love. What you can do is create a better world with your actions. dreaming is great but it needs to come with actions too ...

My actions are there :) even if nobody sees them, there are still there... I'm not gonna force anybody to love nor any other thing... That's not my style, we are animals and we behave according to that, and I accepted that :)

But, this is getting us nowhere. So people will wake up when it will be to late. As always...

I just watch... And love.. :)

nods, so you are vegan I take it ?

That was a little heart wrenching @whack.science!!! Good work my friend :)

I need these WAKE UP poems :))) Thanks a lot, Andy!

Loading...

Coin Marketplace

STEEM 0.30
TRX 0.12
JST 0.034
BTC 63877.55
ETH 3143.56
USDT 1.00
SBD 3.97