A very beautiful story, it made me remember Merlin and Auther of Camelot. The best thing about this story is that it had a medieval setting and magic as well as knighthood.
I love your descriptive ability. The way you were able to explain the details of the fight, the action was just so present and the way you narrated in first person point of view, it made it possible to picture and mirror the action from a reader's point of view, well done, this is awesome