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RE: Haunted Spider: Steem Monsters Character Card Contest Entry
I really liked this story with the lovely description. To be punished for slacking with the bugs is great.
My favorite line:
It came out of nowhere. A grunt. A screech so loud it crawled through my skin and into my brain. And a stomp. I was flattened, suffocated. I was so distraught I cannot even describe how it felt. But I was done.
Thanks. I threw these lines together in a fevered frenzy, much like a spastic five-year-old asking for a drink of water. ;-)