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RE: ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #3 - Post 2: Request for the Middle Part of the Story

here is my proposed middle part

For the love for her child, mama went also to the mountain. Feeling the pain of her daughter and worrisome of what she might do next , mama aims to the summit after being restless for many days of worrying.

Filled hope, Adanma rise to the peak, believing that after all this sacrifice and prayers her husband will be back. A few minutes later her mama made it to the peak too. A tight hug ended their agonizing climb. While telling some few words of encouragement but if saying goodbye, mama fainted dropping on her knees.

Frustration and desperation of Adanma towards her husband was replaced by regret and anxiety towards her ailing mother.

"Why didnt I noticed it. I was so consumed with my own feelings",she uttered. She is in total panic. Will it be to late?

Will she lost not just her husband but also her mother?
She only has one wish to offer after the sacrificial climb towards the summit. Whom will she wish to stay?

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