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RE: It Awakens - A Finish the Story Ending for Week #15
Oh my word this is fantastic! I got goosebumps reading the descriptions here. His emotions weave through imagery beautifully, you go on the journey with him. You have some really powerful lines in here "the man who'd let desperation become his guide" is one that will stay with me!
Thank you so much! After reading a bit of your terrific writing, I'm touched that you enjoyed mine! :)