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RE: The Wisdom of Hopscotch

in #story6 years ago

Did you purpose to have this poem's rhythm mimic that of children's feet on a hop scotch board?

That's how I read it :) I love how you use your words to create an image in my mind and sounds and even smells. You are able to engage all the 5 senses.

That's enough praise :) Eat a cupcake.

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😄 Thanks, Deb! I must figure out how to wordify a cupcake...just for you.

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