I wonder how this story will develop.. sending an army of unarmored men to kill the king - very interesting concept. It's scary to see what is the reason for the king's assassination. I wonder if Konza will beat them all! Oh, and now I realize that king is alone! I think this will have some consequences for him :)

It is a great story but I must admit I agree with the other comment saying that it would be great if you would add lines between the different paragraphs. It would make reading way easier :)

Thank you for sharing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Have a nice day!