Losing within the mind is the mind

in #story6 years ago

Sky river
The blue waters area unit the ocean
One piece of concealment during a piece of clouds is that the same
I lost my very own self to myself

What does one assume and what happens, the waves flow within the stream
Paper boat sinks, fish smile, I am you
Cluttering racing within the eyes of the eyes and pain within the foot
Applying the correct is wrong when the error, insert the cloud within the crank knob
Dodge with the hand, i am simply fools during this world, stupid alone.

What does one assume is that, don't forget to go away the mud, or take alittle bit
Junkeli plays with the fate within the mud
Fill the mind, fill the shop, flip the merchandise around, the pune too typically,
The mind still weeps within the finish, it's a lure
From that day on the leaves of grass, the scene is lost all the ...
The mind becomes empty, during this world i'm fool, stupid alone.

Air birds aloof from the horizon
Youth tune up the stream of fountain
One piece of concealment during a piece of clouds is that the same
My mind lost my very own self.

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