That story could be a good screenplay for a nice movie. You put everything together the young individuals that are just forming and telling your story you let us know that it is our adults responsibility how these little will be once they grow up. they could be happy, confident and strong member of community who can contribute and bring us forward or we can form angry, cruel people who suffered so much unfair treats that they will pay us back. Like the way you are writing, it is easy, fresh, wonderfully described and really emotional.