This is some really great piece of writing. I loved the bottled happiness idea. it is pretty cool. I also liked how the story focused more on the character than on the setting. Those little glimpses; the wristwatch, the bottled happiness, lust and anger of a futuristic world, for me is far better than an overload of setting and little character development. I will be following and hopefully I'll get to see some more dark themed stories from you.