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RE: TALE BY SIR.SKILLFUL1: THE EVIL IN THE VILLAGE OF MOZAMBE #issue* 10
Interesting story. You need to work on your verbs though. You were moving from past to present all through the story.
Interesting story. You need to work on your verbs though. You were moving from past to present all through the story.
Thanks boss, noted.