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RE: #sublimesunday - The Naked Truth #1 (A Butterfly Sings)
I really enjoyed this poem, superb structure to the rhymes. Although it got a little bit 😳 towards the end which caught me out a little.
A very different experience for #SublimeSunday, I can't really do feedback because I have no talent for writing myself - but I certainly enjoyed it, well put together and although surprising in the end - it was a good surprise!
You do have a talent, alow yourself to flow with the tide, trust me you will even surprise yourself, I started writing poems in 2010 today I've Mastered the art
Did use nsfw as a tag sorry if it got ya unaware.