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RE: Cradle 3000. A story for Tell A Story To Me

Your story is very good, @adncabrera. Telling an apparently "innocent" story about the care of a mother to her little daughter, thanks to the assistance of a novel equipment of advanced technology (Cuna 3000; resonates the similarity with the HAL 2000), you manage to subtly and furtively introduce us in the possible horror that the innocuous and sympathetic machine produces in the conscience and conduct of the girl. The narration leads to that end in which supposedly nothing "strange" happens, with a handling of the narrative mechanisms and the language worked with much delicacy, almost objectivity, and even asepsis.
Good luck! Greetings.

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Thank you for your reading and comment, dear @josemalvem.
As always, you do a very sharp reading and that's a privilege for a writer.
Welcome always!

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