Lovely story, @alheath! I love how this story has such a rich array of emotions and images. Love how you worked on this till it is as shiny as it is, bravo!
No worries, you've helped me plenty already and I got lots of great feedback from other people. Being a member of the Block has made such an improvement to my writing.
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This is a beautiful and sad story, @alheath. It breaks my heart. I cannot imagine what it must be like to experience what this character goes through. You have done an amazing job of conveying how a life can be torn asunder by loss.
Lovely story, @alheath! I love how this story has such a rich array of emotions and images. Love how you worked on this till it is as shiny as it is, bravo!
Thank you, I really appreciate your help with it!
You did great work in the editing with this. I was feeling bad I'd not made it in to look again, but you did really well. You should be proud of this.
No worries, you've helped me plenty already and I got lots of great feedback from other people. Being a member of the Block has made such an improvement to my writing.
Thank you!
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Wow! Thank you!
This is a beautiful and sad story, @alheath. It breaks my heart. I cannot imagine what it must be like to experience what this character goes through. You have done an amazing job of conveying how a life can be torn asunder by loss.
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! If enjoyed is the right word...
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