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RE: Stuck In-between... A Twenty Four Hour Short Story

Yes! Yes it does! What will Annabelle find on the other side, the hints in Matt, will she return, will he ever show her what he wanted to...

The way you open this just straight up sets up horror and naivety so very well, you also address the mechanics of how they teleport, without going into exposition. There is a wonderful undercurrent of messing with things not understood, humanity going to far, that echoes old tales of fears of advancement that feels very appropriate for the prompt. The sides you put on this bring so much depth to the story, shown through different sets of eyes the same thing appearing so different. Another amazing @seesladen special <3

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