I think I would have enjoyed a love story between these two :) You created a very sad ending for him but it is probably how it was supposed to be. I assume that she told her parents and they had to bring them to other place where she wouldn't be able to go to the 'other' world again.. no idea..

You wrote this story very well. I like the words that you chose.. it is somehow very catchy..

Thank you for sharing! It was my pleasure to read :)