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RE: 24-Hour Story Contest Short Story - The Unicorn of Brightview
Okay, I'm female and although not a girl any longer I still love unicorns and I love your descriptive writing including unicorns1 Oh! what a terrible fate for the father showing the power of greed - something for us all to watch out for! Thanks for sharing your story!
LOL Thank you, @porters! Indeed, I think greed it's one of the worst dangers known to man, and probably one of the worst capital sins ever (after pride, of course... Satan's favourite sin, at least according to Al Pacino (?)?
I'm very glad that you liked my story! I'll keep up the good work :)