Twenty-one Nineteen

in #twentyfourhourshortstory5 years ago (edited)

{"Time, like an ever-rolling stream, Bears all it’s sons away; they fly forgotten as a dream dies at the opening day" – Isaac Watts.... My post be an entry to @mctiller's 24 hour contest, almost forgot about it. Woops!... Today's music-aide: Jevil's Theme Pacifist Remix [1.] by Kamex (YT) from the Deltarune OST.}

- Twenty-one Nineteen -

Stumbling through the snow, a body shambles left-to-right as the wind pushes and shoves the old, bearded lad. Grumbles escaping his mouth, his hands are still clutched trying to hold on to the last greenbacks he has. A strong breeze flying and swirling in the alleyway, the wind chucks and slams him to the snow-covered concrete. Picking himself up, his hands swabs away the cold, damp snow off. His body’s nerves seizing up every limb, his eyes and heads scanned around for where his cash could’ve gone; but nothing green stuck out in the snow-glazed concrete jungle. His legs continued the march as his eyes swelled up before retreating to dodge the hellishly cold breeze smacking his face

The ticking of clocks rang off, doors squeaking open with every hand pushing against it, carpets announcing the many cart races and all quiet to the wet squeaks of which reverberated against the marble floor. But no ear lended itself to the homeless man’s trudges, all gravitated on the rifling of each unit of cash. A shock, enforced by the nerves, attacked his body again, but his eyes needn’t investigate as his head hung low knowing who he was around. The clocks again going on, that’s all his ears heard but his mind found no joy in being ignored yet it did ease up as no one was staring at him.

Finally, after the repetition of his legs making baby steps, his body finally collided with the counter. His low hung head, for all his acute awareness, didn’t notice the abrupt change and the desk maid’s cough finally broke the silence.

"Sir, what’s your name?"

"He-huh, I’m Connoir."

"Alright Connoir, how long are you staying here for?"

"Miss, I only want to stay here for a night."

"Alright Connoir, that’ll cost you fifty dollars."

"Miss, please, I don’t have the money. Can you spare a room?-"

"Sorry, but everyone here has paid for their room and some don’t like the cold."

"Miss, the cold’s unbearable-"

"Pay up or leave Sir."

A lump choking his voice-box, his body spazzed before twisting around and his legs carrying him out. Yet his slow trudges was deafened by the quick blazing of feet stomping on the floor, the rifles of cash, the exchange of cash in between such and cash registers chinking with each successful money exchange. The cold wind grasping his skin despite the many layers, his legs forcefully trudged back into the icy snowscape as the heat of the hotel retreated back. Ærs plopped down on the steps, his legs and arms hurled up as tears came out; the tears thinking it the last time they get to escape the body, so carrying away the thoughts of any more times he can enjoy the wonders of rest. And so, eyes closing and the snow still furling around, he slumbered.

[1.]

Connoir's shoulders began shaking, multiple hands latching unto him, soon his body jiggling to the shaking and his finally shooting open. The first sights, a sea of colours all invading his eyes and overloading his mind so much that he wished to return to the safe-place he hitherto left. Then the shaker squeaked a voice, paralyzed so thought the mind but his eyes sharpened and the blurs soon floated off elsewhere. Seeing, after long drabs of blur smudged on his vision, the lack of snow, his skin feeling irresistibly cooking, his body energetic and his heart a pumping alright. Once again the shaker squeaked, and this time his ear wouldn't neglect the call.

"He-uh? Where am I? Is this a joke? What place is this?-"

"Mister, calm down. Take a deep breathe, please you look redder than a rose. And take off that old garb, it ain't fierce winter even!"

"Where are- oh there yah are... Well, I shall do it for you I guess. But yeah, it really is hot; I thought we were in the ides of winter, not the midsummer's day."

"Did you hit your head or something, Mister? Anyways, this is the year twenty-one nineteen, place's a Queens and city's a St. Pulaski. And no, why would anyone prank a sleeping person on the ladderwell to the grand library; the most happiest and comfiest place ever to learn... well the ladderwell isn't but the point stands."

"Oh, by the grasps of Fortuna~ I wasn't sleeping for nearly or more than a century, now was I? And ladderwell... yah mean the steps?"

"Ladderwell, smadderwell, steppy-steps, steps. Ladderwell's the word around here, albeit you should've appreciated that since your wearing pre-war military garb underneath. But seeing all this, can't tell if you're joking with me or not. Seen a lot of clowns like you, but none as wise nor smart to fool me this far. Great job, come with me!~"

His frail yet still shaggy body was yanked to the air from the kid. Skipping across the lines across the sidewalk, Connoir's legs stumbling the whole lot before finding the timing of the skipping motion. His arms noticing the clothes about to whisk away to the air, he re-clutched them all and stabbed his legs down to cease the skipping motion. His and the kid's lungs catching air, his voice-box finally rang out.

"Kid, where are yah taking me and who are yah exactly? Why are yah trusting a stranger this much!"

"... Wait, so you're not a clown nor a clever actor... you're actually from the year twenty-nineteen? Well that would explain your free toe from that hole in your boot."

Looking down, it certainly had been a nasty spot that his nose wanted not to be reminded off, yet it look cleansed - maybe even shined if he stared hard enough. Yet the kid's tugs at the pockets shook his mind awake and re-centered his eyes on the kid.

"Gotta say, despite your fashion being so wild, it ain't an eye-sore. Looks nice on yah, despite me being still confused on who yah are. Hell yer accents a bit Irish and Polish to me, but... Please may I get a name and basic descriptor?"

"D'oh! Sorry~ Well name's a Clarentine and I'm taking you to the front of the library. And I trust you... cause yah talk funny and look a lot like great gramps!~ We're going to see and find your history, if they documented you well enough."

Paints of red striking and blurring his cheeks, Clarentine's mind pondered if it was a good idea to paint on his cheeks before deciding to yank him yet again. Connoir's checked once again the clothing of the kid: some weird headscarf on top of a mountain of shiny black hair, some stripped shirt he saw a couple of times when he went past the Slavic communities in his town, a skirt that acted much like trousers and gave a pirate taste to it and of course a choker he barely saw in the clean part of his old city. But his eyes shifted back to what was ahead of him and his hands jumped in front of him to then only feel the empty air as the doors sang its sliding away.

"Itsa Connoir? Righto? Don't care, we're going for mine right after. So please, step inside this and types yours as I type in my name."

"Oh, okay... By the Rum o' Cap'n Morgan it's a pod on a track. Wonder where I could set sail in this ship... wait the kid's a wearing a pirate skirt and here I am talking pirate lingo... and kid looks androgynous. Uh... No. I shouldn't pay attention, kid's a growing up. But what a runner with that energetic carelessness; heh, reminds me a bit of me in that kid. Anyways, seems like keyboards haven't changed much; even gained a few keys here and there. Now just enter in my name, strike the ENTER key and argh!"

The rail whistling the zipping cart, a laser cord zipps him across the archives. His eyes again blurring, but he could make out all the carts zipping by through the intersections and some even floating. At this point, his mind cared less about Clarentine but he felt sick for not even waiting their mark. Yet arriving and seeing a close-one trailing by, his eyes saw a holographic projection dot across the open air. His eyes were wide awoken, stretching even further than he thought possible.

"That's me, that's me. That's a picture of me from college, when degrees meant something! By the grace of Fortuna, my family survived despite loosing me. And what's this, a plus sign? Lemme tap on it? Whoa, that's a pecking metric town of family lines... hey is that kid's name Clarentine?"

"My gut feeling was right!?! Yay~ We finally... found you..."

"What's wrong kiddo?"

"We never actually had found you since you disappeared on the family long ago. And the day you came is the anniversary you had left due to army force-recruiting you..."

"I couldn't find my way back home, plus they injured me badly before I got discharged from the army... I can still feel my left leg limping... where are they, maybe I can calm them... where's my wife Sherry as well? I hope she survived without me after all these years."

"I'm the only one left in the entire family line... I can see if I can request a taxi at this hour..."

The bullet long lodged into his body was again shook, forcing his heart to quiver as his hands grasped it. His eyes poured again, but this time without stop. Both getting off the track, he kept his head low as they entered the cab. The driver looked back, robotic eyes widening and Clarentine whispering to the ear - the circuitry finally making sense of it all. Zipping past the streets full of bikes, walkers, buses and some of them, they eventually hovered over to the entrance of the graveyard. The driver whispering back that they can wait, a smile formed on Clarentine as Connoir was dragged outta the cab. A wild black rose snatched by Clarentine's hands, they continued walking down until they arrived at grave stones; his eyes seeing Sherry's tomb, he felt ghostly fingers raising his chin up to the sky.

Clarentine starring up, she quivered a smile as Connoir's eyes stopped welling; looking at the tombstone inscriptions, both smiled at was written. That was before their minds returned and forced their faces to display identical defeated faces that they just escaped from momentarily. A flower singing it's fall gracefully, Connoir's eyes stared down as the vestige began seeping back into the ground giving a final kiss before fully disappearing into the flower. His fingers picking it up, his lips smooched it before his body helped in placing it down.

"So I guess we're what's left of a great space of history... my name's Connoir and I like to start over again. You?"

"And I guess we are, there's a lot for you to catch up on unfortunately... my name's Clarentine but I like to know how it was all those decades ago. Will you?"

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Two things: tomorrow a post on Grimmy~ (peck yah, that's my nick name for him) and this story is part of the monoverse, multigalaxy setting - just not directly tied to anything.

Like a one-off to give flesh to my philosophy and to strengthen my writing (which I still a hell of a lot strengthening to actually find my voice). Anywho, reminded me of another story about looking back and being in the future that didn't involve Van Wrinkle... until I remembered the apparent misogyny in that book and how unbelievable it was for corporations to merge into one for the net benefit of humanity and not for themselves... Yeah that book if anyone get's the vague references. Let's stop celebrating that book because it predicted the credit card and was influential then. It needn't be influential now since we are dealing with a whole slew of other topics that we definitely need focusing on and a utopia of own to travel towards if we want to be brave to imagine a World where they are resolved finally.

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Ohhh this is so sad! The homeless man, stumbling through the snow, seeking refugee and turned away, only to fall asleep in the bitter cold. But that is not the end of this tale, awoken 100 years later! And he wasn't there the whole time frozen, appearing much to the curiosity of the second protagonist. A very nice way to fulfil the prompt.

The future world as shown through his eyes is wonderful, the change in climate, fashion (love the outfit description) and society. You paint the changes in the last one there so very well, a world where someone with a hole in their shoe is so out of place says a lot about how people look after each other. (and is this a world where people maybe do slip through time now and then?)

The realisation of the relationship between the two characters is such a nice touch, bringing the past and future together, and then visiting the grave, the passage of time and the contrast of those two moments mirroring the joy and sadness of life.

There is a whole other story here, in how those who fight in service of their country are treated, and the desire to start over, and the wish for a place that was possible. He could have been a vet, having served and been so damaged by it that he couldn't go back to his family, passing away in the snow. I doubt it was the story you were referencing in your end blurb, but there is something about this that reminded me and the beauty and sadness of the little match girl <3<3

UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments! Indeed, I had worked on this story a way long back (ending in a Xtian note of the person weeping their own death as a spirit rising to Heaven) but now I wanted to spruce up a happier ending for the old man. And so, this his new Heaven, granted already a rebirth and to try again at life but without the ills of a century past.

Indeed, all the crass has to go! Horrid snow storms, possibly corrected by now. Fashion, better believe it that they didn't suffer having to live with NeoLiberalism for a long time!~ Society on that same beat too~ And I might have fun with this story a bit if I ever come back to it. Indeed, probably the best point of comparison of the two societies was indeed a microcosm example of one's clothing. (The whole Universe is full of galaxy hoppers being ripped open at random, who really knows how he got there and how long it really took him. For all we care, easily could've been in a time-stasis in a galaxy hopper and then released when it opened again once more~)

Indeed, I wanted to touch upon this aspect that I rarely see in Utopian stories ever: what the peck is the great-grandchildren like, where's the plot/story/pacing, what do people think of the past and how do people get around? I can only count on my one finger one story that does it, and it so happens to mainly fill up that one finger: Utopia by Sir Thomas More. Regardless, this is more of a "positive" projection of progress into the future and I just wanted to paint a happy story where indeed some problems yet do still remain unsolved and will have to be talked about and rectified. But, at the same time, isn't a death-defying trait of any one person.

Indeed, I was trying to comment on homeless vets and how disenfranchised they were. At least the ones that were denied of their guaranteed GI (basically like welfare for Troops) at the crises of Capital. And given the chance (notice that I didn't even mention the town's name until the 2119 date kicked in) to exist, he has a chance to connect to whatever is left and at least provide some guidance as a male-figure, knowing full well he can't nor wants to pretend even being a father-figure. (He's a bit smart to notice how a child like Clarentine got around fine, so he'd at least let the child be free and be his guidance instead.) But of course I was hoping to spark a memory inside of yer brain about that lil' match girl!!!!~ <<<<3333

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