Thank you for your contribution.

You video structure is effective. I believe you are improving your speech. You can still work on making your English more understandable. I suggest practicing your English with a native English speaker.

There are many many errors in the text of your post. These errors are easy to fix and should not be in a Utopian post. Be sure to be more careful with your text in future contributions. I suggest asking someone to proof read your work for you.

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