Thank you for your contribution! It is great to see you around again.

On regards of the writing quality I can say that you have improved a lot and the text is easy to read and understand. However, I think there are some improvements you can make to achieve even better copies.

• Some phrases' grammar has been broken by the inadequate use of commas. It's not that your grammar is bad but sometimes the way you separate your phrases by misplacing commas can harm your writing.
• Consistency of style and word use can be improved to have the same "rhythm" across all the text. There are also some points where you are not referring to the same things in the same way (Knacktoken or knack token to name one).

Apart from these minor issues here and there, it has been great reading your work. Since you state that major parts of the content have been written by the project owner, I will adjust the evaluation accordingly.

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