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RE: Red Moon: It Filters Your Screen and Protect Your Eyes Against Blue Light

in #utopian-io5 years ago

Thank you for providing information about the Red moon app. The post is comprehensive and precise. The project seems useful, considering its purpose and efficacy. I appreciate that you chose to write about it. Well done!

On the content side, I appreciate the few personal touches, but the majority hinges on the uses and functions. We value unique information. You could list a set of headlines that are related to the projects and develop them with your thought/experiences. It would make the post to be unique.

Furthermore, the post had style and proofreading issues. I'd urge you to work on improving your writing. Also, Tools like Grammarly and Hemingway may be helpful.

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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!

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