I thank you for your contribution. Here are my thoughts. Note that, my thoughts are my personal ideas on your post and they are not directly related to the review and scoring unlike the answers I gave in the questionnaire;

• Language

  • Lack of grammar and vocabulary makes your tutorial harder to understand. I advise you to proofread before posting and improvising yourself in general.

  • Usage of the first person makes tutorials harder to comprehend. If I were you, I would try my best to use the third person by changing the subjects of the sentences. I advise you to do that.

• Content

  • As @portugalcoin stated, it's repetitive. If you showed how routes work with an example, in the next tutorial, show something else instead of just showing routes again with a different example. By doing that, you can reduce repetitiveness by a great amount.

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