I thank you for your contribution. Here are my thoughts. Note that, my thoughts are my personal ideas on your post and they are not directly related to the review and scoring unlike the answers I gave in the questionnaire;

• Structure

  • It's hard to figure out which part does what. Structuring your post with names of the topic would solve it -e.g, "Storing Cookies", "Retrieving Cookies". I advise you to do so as it would increase the readability of the post. Other than this, the structure of your post looks good.

• Language

  • Some of your sentences are artificial. This makes them hard to read and understand. To overcome that, I advise you to check the structure of your sentences. For example, using "we" for each sentence in the post makes it boring to read.

  • There are some sentences which are hard to understand because of the vocabulary and grammar. I advise you to proofread your posts before posting. It can increase the efficiency of your post.

• Content

  • The content in your post is relatively simple. I personally appreciate tutorials which address complex matters more. Nonetheless, it is useful for beginners and I still appreciate it! :)

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