eNDLESS

in #writersblock5 years ago (edited)

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Fingertips, slipping through my hands, from my grasp
Gone, millions of miles, lifetimes from my love
Forever searching for you, in someone else
Gone, but somehow always here, on this journey
The road ahead endless, a long streak of loneliness
And as I pass each milestone of my heart,
Recalling our most cherished moments, and their landmarks
I guard what’s left of me, unwilling to fill the half of me, that’s empty
Shielding my heart, by impenetrable brick tower walls
My rear-view mirror begins to reflect regrets
Of your fingertips, slipping through my hands, from my grasp

Apart from me, parting ways
Millions of miles away from your touch, lifetimes from my love
Only able to admire you from a distance,
Every road leading to you, endless
Streets of loneliness

Original work by - @onelovek

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Excellent word smithing. I love:

Recalling our most cherished moments, and their landmarks

Throughout the years when I have forgotten the conversation with a loved one, I always remember the place.

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Nice job!! Love your writing style! (^_^)

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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it

Wow, what a lovely poem. I love the endless road contrast . Are you writing from experience, I can almost feel the pain.

Thank you, I'm grateful you liked it , and that's the main source of my writing

I adore your way with words. I can honestly see a book of poetry in your future. Keep writing for our pleasure.

Thank you , and I'll definitely try to keep you entertained lol

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