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RE: [Original Novella] Mansionarium, Part 4
Am enjoying the story, every bit of it, am having issues with your description, I think you're making too much description per character/occurence.
You could have a list of all the works you need to destroy compiled in an hour or less.
I think there should be a comma somewhere in this statement, what do you think.
Nah. I appreciate the constructive crits though, have an upvote.