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RE: Flash Fiction: quitting life
I really like how you have gone a different way with this, and in the end she doesn't quit, but instead realises something that had been right in front of her the whole time, it is a good twist. I like how you have explored the effects of the pill, and how they had been used to keep worker sedated and not thinking too much. Nice ending!
Thanks @Calluna for the encouraging comment. Take care. :-)