I enjoyed your fiction. I like the way you mixed the real world with the game. It's a little confusing at times but it makes it interesting as well :) I had to re-read some parts to really understand as some words are very technical. But it made me think and this is always good.

At the beginning I thought they were some kind of aliens who needed some equipment to survive in world. But then it became clearer and clearer that it was not the case :)

Great, interesting writing! Thank you for sharing!