Such a fantastic story- and sounds like you have an entire world mapped out around Dunman! I've just seen in one of the other comments that you have written more tales featuring him- I'll definitely be off to read them later.

You really have a way of painting pictures- and had me completely immersed in the scene along with the two characters - I was completely hooked! Looking forward to reading more of your writing and discovering what horrors await in the Unturned Kingdom (which I kept reading as United Kingdom ;) )... or if the horror arrives with Dunman!

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