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RE: Candlelight and Wine Part 2 ...Snowbound and Helpless

in #writing6 years ago

I like it, but I have to admit that those last few lines pushed me away from the speaker. Earlier I got creeper vibes, but then I got slaughterhouse vibes... You know?

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ha ha, I can see that if you take him literally, but he's over-wrought and hyperbolic - he's more angry at himself for making a goddess out of an ordinary woman

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