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RE: Burning in the Darkness

in #writing5 years ago

Olivia shivered in the dark. Okay Osandra, let Isaac out of his box.

Olivia's eyes began to glow red in the darkness.

I don't think I have read the previous parts (can't promise I'll go back and catch up, bad thing about Steemit when we find so much good atuff and miss just as much), so i'll take this as a self-contained story.
It's fantastic, intriguing, very well narrated. Nice transition from one scene to the next. Leaves me wnating to forget about the to-do-list and catch up.

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Thanks @hlezama :) I have tried to make each section work as a self contained story, so glad to hear that you were able to enjoy it as such. This is intended as a near-reality story, but obviously with elements of the fantastic and unbelievable woven into the familiarity of 2019 America. Strange things are afoot :)

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