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RE: Deathwish, Part 5: Grector Smash
Wow critically looking at this, I'd say this is totally splendid really first I'd like to actually appreciate the fact that you used a totally different setting far away from earth I'm actually thinking maybe s cosmos inside gje galaxy and this piece must have been written to date into the future.
I've not ready other parts but it's seems Alicia is goody with drawing she must have been very terrified seeing that rock speaking.
Beautiful descriptions and I even like the way you use humor
Yes, the Inverse is definitely suppose to feel like space, and is definitely not the normal world. I've got a decently deep lore planned around it, but that will be discussed more in my third novel. At least, that's the current plan.
Anyways, I'm glad to hear you liked it!