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RE: [Original Novel] Pressure: First Encounter, Part 11
How well this text is read with a good glass of carubrus rum, @alexbeyman! I feel as if instead of seeing a chapter in a series, I'm reading it. A part full of suspense, especially the moment Eliot and Nate were supposed to enter. You solved it very well! Also the reflection that they made then of the creature and its objective. From what they say, it could get worse! Good Friday.