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RE: The Ghost on the Golf Course - Part Three

in #writing5 years ago

Enjoying the story, Keith.
My take: If Doris was a decent person in her lifetime, she would not try to hurt others as a ghost.
She is looking for her shoes and chasing Victor down for them. Does she only scare men?
I blame any evil happenings on Victor and think he is the second ghost, impersonating Doris.
Why... because he is evil. U&R

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Thank you, that's a very interesting take on things...what if Doris had been the evil one all along, and Victor killed her in self-defence? As it turns out, Doris does not scare only men... you would have to ask Cathy... or stay tuned more the next episode! ;-)

Did Cathy see the spectre of Doris too? Can’t wait to see what happens next. 👻

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